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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:42 pm    Post subject: What would you do with this? Reply with quote

simple whole not chords, scratch vocals... 128 bpm

I have an idea after the 2nd verse to take the last 2 measures and go to a cadenced 8th not "rant.... followed by a half note rest with a 1/4-1/8-1/8 drum lead in into the final chorus.... but then again maybe not

some of the lyrics are from my life... others are fabricated because make-believe made for a better story line Laughing and I'll never admit which is which



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PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not a big fan of common names (I, me, you, we, ect.) in most lyrics because they are completely over done. I also feel that you have to many words in your lines, which turns music into "spoken word", which typically fails to convey musicality to me. Just my opinion.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

opinion so noted!

I tend to be wordy, just my style

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It sounds like three songs to me. If it was me, I'd hang onto that nice chord progression and concentrate on one of the ideas you're playing with.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

2nd opinion duly noted! Very Happy

actually I was looking more for suggestions on instruments

I could expand and turn it into a trilogy!

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 10:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yet another unprovoked attack stainless, hope you like it.

I'm the one panned slightly left, so's you don't get us mixed up. Laughing

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 11:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

GT- cool

there's a fuller mix in TL (Besides all that)

you always sing this high? (shades of Timothy B. Schmidt!)

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 11:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks stainless, had much fun doing this one with you, virtually speaking.

"Allways sing high?" No, there's a lot of falseto here. I just thought this might be cool against your low voice, kind of night/day contrast. Seems to give it an old fashoined vibe to my ears.

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