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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 7:08 am    Post subject: Write a song right here #2 Reply with quote

update , well Daniel and i are collabing writing lyrics , which i think are almost done ,

So ....... i am looking for more stuff to do ? Very Happy .......anyone ??



Just checking to see if anybody is up for a collab ?

I like to start with the lyrics , cause that's the only bit i can do Razz

Anybody got a " Song Title " or a " killer " opening line ?

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm having dinner with the funk
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tired
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's the title of a Self song, Paul...cool song too.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pity. I was going to write it.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 5:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Trojka wrote:
It's the title of a Self song, Paul...cool song too.



oh ! , sorry ,

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

dobro wrote:
Pity. I was going to write it.



but ? i thought you had already written it ???

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Some day I will be part of a band, and somebody in the band will say something like 'I'm having dinner with the funk' and we'll all laugh and I will start a song with that line and somebody else will join in cuz they've nothing better to do and one thing will lead to another and two hours later a song will be finished that will change the face of the world forever. This will happen again and again. It will seem normal.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 4:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"It Changed" - title
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 11:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Takes Time To Heal"
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Takes Time To Heal


I've been hurt
Now on the mend
Your a flirt
This could be the end

Need time away
See how i feel
Nothing to say
Takes time to heal

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That,s a start
let's go with it and see where it takes us. Do you have the skill sets for tracking?

I've been hurt
And now I'm on the mend
The veil that once embarrassed me
Now leads us to the end

With your last goodbye kiss
You can see how it feels
When there is nothing to be said
but it takes time to heal.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry , no tracking skills here , i just write lyrics .


Maybe time away
Will help clear my head
Wake up to a new day
Try to make sense of what we said


It takes time to heal
That's why i need to go
To a place in the hills
To let my feelings flow

nah..........don't like those lines . Razz

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 4:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very well get a chorus and a tag then I can lay something down.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 11:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've been hurt
And now I'm on the mend
The veil that once embarrassed me
Now leads us to the end

With your last goodbye kiss
You can see how it feels
When there is nothing to be said
but it takes time to heal.

Maybe time away
Will help clear my head
Wake up to a new day



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 11:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Need a drum & bass part then I can fit guitar and vocal in time. Anybody have that skill?
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 1:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe time away
Will help clear my head
Wake up to a new day

Think about what we said

CHORUS

I need time to think
Space to be alone
Fresh air to breathe
Turn off the mobile phone


TAG / REFRAIN

It takes time to heal
When your not made of steel
It takes time to heal

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="teek"]Maybe time away
Will help clear my head
Wake up to a new day

Think about what we said

Maybe time away
Will help clear my head
Wake up to a new day
The old day gone and dead

or...

Maybe time away
Will help clear my head
Wake up to a new day
Stop thinking what was said

See, if you want to clear your head, you got to *stop* thinking about what was said. But if you're locating the emotional center of gravity in some kind of present pain, then you have to change that previous line about 'now I'm on the mend'. It's got to be a desire to mend, but nowhere near there yet.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 8:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I been hurt
Now I need to mend
The veil that's (been) clouding up my mind
Is certainly no friend

Oh that last goodbye kiss
I could tell you how it feels
And everything you said to me
But it takes time to heal

Maybe time away
Will help me clear my head
Wake up to a new day

How many days and nights
How many if only what had beens
Baby who's a fool for you
And all these broken dreams

Need time away
See how i feel
Nothing to say
It takes time to heal

Maybe time away
Will help me clear my head
Wake up to a new day

TA-da! Closing in on a hit.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 1:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i edited my previous post .

Dobro , yeah it did need an "edit" , Very Happy

But i am not singing it , so i alway's leave the final edit to the vocalist . Smile

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Getting it ready for the radio baby....will get the vocal and guitar & string parts down today and see what we have. Good write guys.
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2 Aussies and a Nashville Kat who would have thunk it...
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 7:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok guys lets get this hit ready for the studio please email me at jwstallings413@gmail.com so we can do some paper work.....
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 10:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure, but we're still a step away from making it shine. You've got ace delivery but what do you think about that last verse - I just copied what Teek wrote into the fourth verse position cuz I thought that the sparseness might be really effective. But in previous verses you're singing way more syllables in all the lines. You happy with the stripped down fourth verse?
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i,m with Paul , on this , i was also thinking it still needs " tweaking "

for the Chorus i was thinking , oh wait , re - reading your post J.W. ,

it seems like it's " in the can " so is it too late for "tweaking "

i've got these lines in my head , so i need to write them down , somewhere
Razz

Chorus .

Need to find an oasis
Silence the cell phone
To re-energize
To find my way home

It takes time to heal
When your not made of steel
It takes time to heal

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