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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2017 1:42 pm    Post subject: SOŅADORA you're our world Reply with quote

SOŅADORA is a Saudi 27 years old girl. She is facing and endure much pressure in her life there. She can not drive, going aboard without her male family member decision, where there is a male guardian law in Saudi. She wrote that she is so sad and she really need to feel free. She wrote that she want to go out the planet because she is so sad. I tried to write a song to her, trying to maintain her hope, and making her happy in that sad situation.

I titled it:

((SOŅADORA you're our world))

Where ever you go our hearts go
You're the freedom's symbol & logo
World has hope twenty seven years ago
SOŅADORA .. SOŅADORA you're our world

You're our source of love, of motivation
You're our hope in this miserable situation
Your place always will be our destination
SOŅADORA .. SOŅADORA ..You're our world

How clever and creative person are you
You're our humanity's prove and clue
Your opinions are always amazing and true
SOŅADORA .. SOŅADORA ..You're our world

By your coast we sit and to you we releave
Our worries, our wishes and our social enslave
then go nd having sweet dreams in your cave
SOŅADORA .. SOŅADORA ..You're our world

When we see you our eyes get warm
When we hear you our ears get calm
When we miss you our hearts get harm
SOŅADORA .. SOŅADORA ..You're our world



I am not English native speaker, I know i made many mistakes, So please I need your notices and comments

Thanks a lot .
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry, but it's not close enough to English to work. The song might be good, but, the lyrics aren't exactly Engiish.
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