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teek
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Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 8:46 pm Post subject: Shiver teek

This is my version of Shiver .

As you guy's know, i have not posted stuff like this b4 , this is my first attempt at looping tracks together . so go easy on me .please. Rock On

let me know if the link does not work .( link currently disabled )

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dobro
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Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:22 pm Post subject:

The link works. My only comment is about the piano part - I think it would be better if it didn't speed up suddenly. Just a steady pace throughout would be more effective and atmospheric, I think. _________________ You must enter a message when posting.

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teek
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Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:16 pm Post subject:

Hi, Dobro . I will take on board your suggestions , the part where the Piano speeds up is where a Guitar solo will hopefully fit . i may have to split the Piano there though , not sure , first i have to learn how to cut or split the track . It is only 2 minutes long , so i think i will need to stretch it out a bit . _________________ :arrow:

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Contemptuous Zlurgh
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Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 10:14 am Post subject:

I agree with a steady tempo. The dynamics of this piece are better accentuated by constantly varying the arrangement. If it was to be left only as a piano piece then perhaps a varying tempo would work better....but it's a bit hard to collaborate and sync tracks when the tempo changes throughout. I like the piece though...that's the very kind of mood I like to play lead over. Let me know when it's ready....I'll be all over that. _________________ I read Emerson on the can. A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds - true. But a consistent reading of Emerson has its uses, nevertheless. ZlurghMusic

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teek
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Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 12:31 pm Post subject:

Thx.Stu. and Paul. i am snipping away , << that pesky piano piece has been cut out . Now i just need to go wake up my vocalist , i think he's asleep down in the Dungeon somewhere . _________________ :arrow:

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Loob
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Posted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 12:58 pm Post subject:

No permission on google drive.

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teek
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Posted: Sat Feb 15, 2014 7:09 pm Post subject:

thx. check your PM. _________________ :arrow:

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Loob
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Posted: Sun Feb 16, 2014 7:09 am Post subject:

teek wrote:

thx. check your PM.

Ok I finally got to hear this, and now that I have I agree with what has been said about the tempo changes. Keep it a steady tempo and I'd also remove the sound effects until after the instrument tracks are put in and the arrangement is done. Then you'd know where the effects would suit more. If you create a steady tempo on this I'd be up for throwing some ideas at you for development. I sent you an email and we are connected via G+ now too. Thumb Up

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teek
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2014 11:08 pm Post subject:

Hey , Stu. Are your " mail notifications " on.....??? i have sent you a PM. _________________ :arrow:

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teek
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 6:04 pm Post subject:

Hey Dave , is it Wood or Woods , i need to get that right for the credits btw , i have a vocal done for this track now , by Anthony Vincent . _________________ :arrow:

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stainless
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 8:46 am Post subject:

the link no longer works _________________ Stainless .... I wish I could be traded like a penny in the arcade for a token to be played on a cello strung with strings that are my dreams Check out our music at http://www.reverbnation.com/#!/stainlessbrown[/url]

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teek
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 10:32 am Post subject:

stainless wrote:

the link no longer works Sad

oops , the new version is not posted yet , sorry .
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teek
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Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 6:29 pm Post subject:

new track posted , in first post , where the link used to be, i am not sure if i should use Dave's Piano all the way through , and that would be a bit hard , because that snippet is all i have , also i am thinking of adding a guitar solo , or riff , in the gaps between vocals . ???????? is Stu still around , ???? _________________ :arrow:

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